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Started by Volcanic Me, October 06, 2009, 06:43:01 PM

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Volcanic Me

I'm falling down,
There's no sound,
Your voice makes me hit the ground.

Things will be great,
When you're not so irate,
I'm willing to wait.

I don't know what I'm striving for,
I don't know why I haven't said it before,
I just know that you're worth waiting for.

Falling down,
No sound,
Hit the ground.

There's no sign,
I have no need to whine,
Just give me a sign,
And things will be divine.

I don't know if my efforts are wasted,
But all I know is this,
You're worth waiting for.

Magnacore

This poem seems to be about a girl that's not entirely ready to be in a relationship; but you're not going to give up. You seem to have dedication. From deciphering your poetry it seems that you're in a rough spot. Many blessings, you seem to be a good bloke.
Turn from evil and do good; seek peace and pursue it.
â€" Psalm 34:14

Hate isn't the opposite of love;
Indifference is the opposite of love;
Because if you hate, you still care.

regents fury

Nice one brah! You got some real talent!

Purity

nice song/poem bro
<--Hated by many, but loved by all-->

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Purity A.K.A Cheeezy ~ in-game

regents fury

I'mma bump this one brah, it sucks to see your talent go to waste.

Banjo Hick

I know, he had a good one on his forums but I'm not allowed to post it for him and he doesn't have an account on here anymore...

mafia137

Woah,effective, Did you write this yourself???
I'm Happy With What I Have Got.

Joker

he's banned so he can't reply any mod forums lock this please.



Bri

You CANNOT request a lock on another person's topic.




regents fury

Especially on ones as good as these.

Volcanic Me

Thanks for the feedback everyone, and thanks for keeping my poems alive, Tj! I owe you tons for that. :D

Prehistoric

Dude i can see this it works...it fits..
Only YOU can prevent forum fires.

Volcanic Me

Haha, thanks I guess. I wrote this to give to someone I know, and she gave it back. <_< So yeah. xD

Prehistoric

Sorry that sucks.. honestly some parts make it sound like the person really hurt you..
Only YOU can prevent forum fires.

ini432

ya i like the sonG! man its awsome!
shut up noob