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Started by Diablo637, June 20, 2008, 06:27:55 AM

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Diablo637

 

The land we now walk,

Was walked by our ancestors,

In a time of peace and simplicity

Our great God roamed these lands.



For many years this land has gone un-trudged

But now in a day of reckoning

I ask you

Will you father?

Will you walk again?

This was one of many poems that I had to write for school.
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Diablo637

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Volcanic Me

Great poem, even though I don't believe in "God".

nikeman

Great poem! I can't write poems have as good as u.
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Chaoslancex

well its a nice  :D

keep up the good work. ;)

Chaos.