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Started by the black arrow, June 20, 2008, 05:56:05 AM

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How well written is this poem?

horrible
poor
fair
good
excellent

the black arrow

Love is a burning passion
Full of light, love, and desire
Each is different in many ways
With two hearts required
Equally they will try

The same goal in mind
Will both make it?
Obsticles will block the path
Chalenges shall come
To overcome is a test
Of which is difficult
Many will fail
Some will pass

There are many questions
Some answers are still unknown
Only one can be answered by time
Will it last?
The pain of an arrow hidden in the shadows know as Black Arrow

Sweet Tea

I like it! =]
You left out an "l" in challenge. Other than that awesome.
Desensitize yourself to everything. Isn't that what it's all about?