backfire

[Paulnoter55]

I love you but you hate me,
why won't you go out with me?
Kristy i love but prestion i hate,
treating me like shit.
Else your so dumb,
you can't even use a drum,
(boom boom boom boom boom boom boom boom.)
sister annoying you are,
breaking my new guitar.
people think I'm evil,
but I'm misunderstood.
lee lee the kitty lee,
always lazay.
Mom mom yoursometimes a bomb,
blowing up like atoms.
Dad dad you love me,
why can't you express it with glee?
Mike mike my friend i like,
acting like a 3 year old trike.
Hate you?
i love you but you hate me.









please post your thoughts about this.

[Paulnoter55]

Please post your thoughts!

[Prehistoric]

Good you have A LOT OF POTENTIAL But you need to practice on your thoughts... maybe only writing about things you feel strongly about...things that hurt you things that make you feel awesome...things that are beautiful.