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Off Topic => Art => Songs, poems, etc. => Topic started by: O My Devil on April 22, 2011, 05:47:05 AM

Title: I Believed You
Post by: O My Devil on April 22, 2011, 05:47:05 AM
I believed when you said that you loved me,
I believed when you said you would never leave me,
I believed when you said you had to study,
I even believed you, again, when you said, ‘me and you forever.
Now I know you are nothing but a liar, and a cheater, you are a betrayer.
I let you in my world and you destroyed it,
I gave you my heart and you broke it,
what else would you have done to me if you had gotten the chance,
you know what I can't believe most of all,
the mere fact that I even believed you. . . .
Title: Re: I Believed You
Post by: Francis on April 26, 2011, 12:53:20 AM
Very interesting poem.  :) Unfortunatly this happens ALOT in the world and it's ridiculous. Luckily, i'm not one of those guys. :P
Title: Re: I Believed You
Post by: Jake on April 28, 2011, 07:51:39 AM
Nice, You made this on your own?
Title: Re: I Believed You
Post by: Drunk Mario on April 28, 2011, 05:21:16 PM
Quote from: Terror on April 28, 2011, 07:51:39 AM
Nice, You made this on your own?

Goodjob if you did.
Title: Re: I Believed You
Post by: O My Devil on April 28, 2011, 06:53:06 PM
i did...
Title: Re: I Believed You
Post by: Thrive on April 28, 2011, 08:00:41 PM
If this is about your gf cheatin on ya, I understand.
The only thing I did differently from you was instead of writing a poem, I beat the living shit out of the respected member of community who decided to try to sneak away with my gf.
Title: Re: I Believed You
Post by: dieknowsawr on April 28, 2011, 08:37:54 PM
Story of my life.. I like this poem, 9/10. :).
Title: Re: I Believed You
Post by: Knight IV on May 03, 2011, 02:39:56 PM
Excellent..I loved it.
Title: Re: I Believed You
Post by: Daxking on May 03, 2011, 07:33:13 PM
Great poem.  :'(
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