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Off Topic => Art => Songs, poems, etc. => Topic started by: hill stead on October 15, 2009, 03:12:22 AM

Title: the kid
Post by: hill stead on October 15, 2009, 03:12:22 AM
There once was a kid,
He sat on the poty lid,
He fell and he flopped,
And broke his leg on the pot.

His mother cried,
The dog died,
And everbody sighed,

Everybody rushed in the bedroom,
But only saw a bread groom with his broom,
They starred in disgust,
When James got stung by a wasp.

He yowled,
And everyone howled,
The kid’s mom ran out,
And saw a man.

He was a man of leather,
Who flew away like a feather,
The kid was in distress,
As his leg was caught in his dress.

When they reached the lab,
They saw the doc in a cab,
The doc was handed a fork,
When the kid took of the frock.

Then came a dog,
With a big fat log,
The doc took the log,
And the kid ran away like a hog!

P.S.
Please bare with me if you didn’t like this poem cause I wrote it when I was 9 years old

Note: the kid refers to my coz

peace out ;D
Title: Re: the kid
Post by: Drunk Mario on November 02, 2009, 08:19:04 AM
Nice Job!!!! Keep up the good work!    It is really nice more people are sharing there own material they made up!!
Title: Re: the kid
Post by: lollol on November 05, 2009, 02:27:58 PM
yeah its fantastic
Title: Re: the kid
Post by: Mooshu on March 04, 2010, 04:26:48 AM
-claps- Poor kid though.  :'(
Title: Re: the kid
Post by: wouter on March 04, 2010, 11:43:52 AM
Well done on your 9th. :)
Title: Re: the kid
Post by: Maxi on March 04, 2010, 01:35:34 PM
Pfffff!! HAHAHAHAHA! Funny... :) :)
Title: Re: the kid
Post by: Pk0wnedall on March 04, 2010, 11:50:19 PM
Oooh sad, But a good poem.
Title: Re: the kid
Post by: Joker on March 05, 2010, 04:59:28 AM
its sad but a nice poem..