How long am I going to hate you?
I don't hate you,
I'm tired,
Tired of you.
I do not want to start?
What don't I want to start,
A fire,
A blaze,
A relationship that won't fall apart?
You said you were sorry for what you put me through, you're not with that whore?
You don't know what you put me through,
A christmas without a dad,
I've never seen a 14 year old so sad,
You're not with that whore,
That's great,
Too bad you're not with me anymore.
Think whatever I want?
You don't care what I think,
You don't care what I want,
What's my favorite color?
What do I want?
Maroon,
A father figure,
You didn't know either, and that's not something to flaunt.
Goodbye?
But why,
Why, oh, why,
Would my father tell me goodbye?
I'm not about to die,
I haven't been caught in a lie,
Why the hell are you saying goodbye?
I can forget about you?
Too bad,
So sad,
Not after the hell you put me through.
I'm not trying?
How am I not trying,
I'm crying,
You were my father,
But you just seemed to get farther,
My hatred burned hotter,
Why don't you be a real father?
You don't care?
How can you not care,
You've been trying for two years,
You've been crawling behind me,
Shouting,
Lying,
Crying,
Not trying,
How can you try,
If you don't give a damnn?
You put me through hell,
That's something you did well,
I won't forget,
I won't forgive,
I hope you won't forget,
Because I'll remember you for as long as I live.
Dear Volcanic Me,
I, think that is one of your best poems ever! keep up the good work and keep making really good poems
Nicest Regards,
Jack7. :):):):):)
Man.. you should look into publication
Those are some mighty fine words. It seems to me that you abhor your father; am I correct in assuming so?
Very nice, broski! Happy birthday as well, maaaaaaan.
Thanks guys, for the feedback, Tj, yet again, thanks for keeping the poems alive.
WOAH! Dude really good...shoulda come into poems/songs sections yesterday(When my account was made)
Haha, thanks. This one was dedicated to my dearest father. >_>
The first line of each stanza is either something he said to/asked me.
Thats a good way to start off a stanza ...Makes me feel sad..Is the poem fulfilling its purpose?
Your a boss travis ;)
Quote from: Prehistoric on February 18, 2010, 03:47:49 PM
Thats a good way to start off a stanza ...Makes me feel sad..Is the poem fulfilling its purpose?
The purpose was to vent, so I guess yeah, that and decking him served the same purpose. :D
Quote from: caponer on February 19, 2010, 07:29:47 AM
Your a boss travis ;)
Haha thanks. :P
Just love your poems dude. Much love from mooshu! <3