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Title: You
Post by: Volcanic Me on October 06, 2009, 06:43:01 PM

I'm falling down,
There's no sound,
Your voice makes me hit the ground.

Things will be great,
When you're not so irate,
I'm willing to wait.

I don't know what I'm striving for,
I don't know why I haven't said it before,
I just know that you're worth waiting for.

Falling down,
No sound,
Hit the ground.

There's no sign,
I have no need to whine,
Just give me a sign,
And things will be divine.

I don't know if my efforts are wasted,
But all I know is this,
You're worth waiting for.

Title: Re: You
Post by: Magnacore on October 13, 2009, 12:49:28 PM

This poem seems to be about a girl that's not entirely ready to be in a relationship; but you're not going to give up. You seem to have dedication. From deciphering your poetry it seems that you're in a rough spot. Many blessings, you seem to be a good bloke.

Title: Re: You
Post by: regents fury on December 16, 2009, 08:59:11 PM

Nice one brah! You got some real talent!

Title: Re: You
Post by: Purity on December 24, 2009, 10:27:08 PM

nice song/poem bro

Title: Re: You
Post by: regents fury on January 21, 2010, 12:21:22 AM

I'mma bump this one brah, it sucks to see your talent go to waste.

Title: Re: You
Post by: Banjo Hick on January 21, 2010, 01:14:31 AM

I know, he had a good one on his forums but I'm not allowed to post it for him and he doesn't have an account on here anymore...

Title: Re: You
Post by: mafia137 on January 21, 2010, 06:36:21 AM

Woah,effective, Did you write this yourself???

Title: Re: You
Post by: Joker on January 21, 2010, 03:39:43 PM

he's banned so he can't reply any mod forums lock this please.

Title: Re: You
Post by: Bri on January 21, 2010, 05:28:05 PM

You CANNOT request a lock on another person's topic.

Title: Re: You
Post by: regents fury on January 21, 2010, 09:06:45 PM

Especially on ones as good as these.

Title: Re: You
Post by: Volcanic Me on January 22, 2010, 06:59:51 PM

Thanks for the feedback everyone, and thanks for keeping my poems alive, Tj! I owe you tons for that. :D

Title: Re: You
Post by: Prehistoric on February 18, 2010, 02:00:52 PM

Dude i can see this it works...it fits..

Title: Re: You
Post by: Volcanic Me on February 18, 2010, 02:58:28 PM

Haha, thanks I guess. I wrote this to give to someone I know, and she gave it back. <_< So yeah. xD

Title: Re: You
Post by: Prehistoric on February 18, 2010, 03:49:17 PM

Sorry that sucks.. honestly some parts make it sound like the person really hurt you..

Title: Re: You
Post by: ini432 on February 19, 2010, 11:45:31 PM

ya i like the sonG! man its awsome!

Title: Re: You
Post by: wouter on February 20, 2010, 02:15:14 AM

Quote from: ini432 on February 19, 2010, 11:45:31 PM
ya i like the sonG! man its awsome!

It's a poem..

Title: Re: You
Post by: imnotme on February 21, 2010, 08:42:04 PM

It's a poem dumb ass... And I like it. Tana shouldn't've given it back.

Title: Re: You
Post by: Prehistoric on February 21, 2010, 10:11:11 PM

Quote from: imnotme on February 21, 2010, 08:42:04 PM
It's a poem dumb cabbage... And I like it. Tana shouldn't've given it back.

lol love the double abbreviated word...ONE WORD... and it is a poem.. Don't say cabbage it is against rules...

Title: Re: You
Post by: Volcanic Me on February 21, 2010, 10:12:48 PM

It's more like a message from the heart that got rejected, but whatever. <_<

Title: Re: You
Post by: Prehistoric on February 21, 2010, 10:17:22 PM

Wow honestly i thought you wrote it about me "You" :'( ;D

Title: Re: You
Post by: imnotme on February 21, 2010, 10:36:49 PM

It was to Tana... You think he gives a load of cum about you?? Lol....

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