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Title: kick butt poem i wrote
Post by: netmaster296 on September 27, 2009, 10:21:21 PM

The world is ending
its the second time around
all the people are rending
each other to the ground
The Mayans have betrayed us
and now we have lost
all of the brethren
that once loved us
Beginning anew without our fear
will be such a defined new clear
and so the world will never die, we put fire in our sky

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Post by: Delicious on September 28, 2009, 01:58:19 AM

Not bad, not bad at all.

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Post by: Drunk Mario on September 29, 2009, 08:58:33 PM

nice poem!!!!!! keep up the good work! it's nice to see alot of people are tryign new things and being successful at it :D

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Post by: hill stead on October 17, 2009, 02:41:51 AM

nice work dude

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Post by: kxdk on October 24, 2009, 10:49:13 PM

Nice poem you should practice more, you could be an author for poems.
People make quite a bit of money doing those kinds of things.

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