I've been high,
I've waved the drugs good-bye.
I've been fucked up,
I've changed and haven't slipped up.
I've free-based, snorted, and have felt it.
I've lied to faces, now sorted , and have quit it.
I have soared like a kite,
As high as the sky.
But nothing can compare,
To life's natural high.
Heroin makes the sky dark and zip bye.
This is why, lies deprive.
I've changed from addicted to unrestricted.
I can live my life now,
I can say to drugs good fight, and to take a bow.
Life's natural high consists of,
Feeling like you're floating high above.
It makes you want to stay,
It makes you want to replay your day.
No drug can compare,
To how this drug makes you taste the air.
It makes you lose,
All your worries and woes.
It makes you want to give addiction,
One gigantic shove.
So if you're in a struggle,
And life's one messy juggle.
Take a stand with me,
And let's show how we can break free.
Sober date: 6/27/09. ^.^
Love you fool. Never forget that. <3. Love it.
Quote from: Mooshu on June 22, 2010, 04:34:06 AM
Love you fool. Never forget that. <3. Love it.
Thanks Jose. :o
Nice poem jeremy, i love it! Hope to see my my sexy inspiron!
Quote from: Pk0wnedall on June 22, 2010, 04:45:27 AM
Nice poem jeremy, i love it! Hope to see my my sexy inspiron!
Shank you Jack!
This is REALLY good. I can't usually understand poems at all, but this one I do. This one makes sense. This poem is song material.
Quote from: Bill on June 22, 2010, 04:58:42 AM
This is REALLY good. I can't usually understand poems at all, but this one I do. This one makes sense. This poem is song material.
Bill's the man! Lol thanks for your comment breh.
I don't understand any of poems. There just some wise riddles putted together. Got respect for the meaning of this poem.
Jeremy, care if i send it to my mate Niels because he is working on a anti-drugs project for school. I think it is really good to use.
One love ;)
Quote from: caponer on June 22, 2010, 05:01:16 AM
I don't understand any of poems. There just some wise riddles putted together. Got respect for the meaning of this poem.
Jeremy, care if i send it to my mate Niels because he is working on a anti-drugs project for school. I think it is really good to use.
One love ;)
Yeah dude that's ok with me! Just give me credit please. Thanks for your great comment much love, one love. ;)
Your a great poem author, you should get famous and wear some cool beret ;)
It's a great poem. ;D
Quote from: Maxi on June 22, 2010, 05:12:17 AM
Your a great poem author, you should get famous and wear some cool beret ;)
It's a great poem. ;D
Thanks Maxi : )! I had some extra inspiration from my step-brother, who also struggles with addiction, but that's a whole different story.
Thanks for the comment!
Wow Jeremy.. This really came out of nowhere! This is a very well thought out poem about a real life experience! I give a 10/10! I usually can't really get the meaning of some poems but this one seems to stand out. Very good job!
Dude this poem is amazing. I agree with Bill, it would make an awesome song. 8)
Quote from: Ry60003333 on June 22, 2010, 10:07:54 PM
Dude this poem is amazing. I agree with Bill, it would make an awesome song. 8)
Thanks I love you. ::)
Love you Jeremy, Great work bro!
Nice poem Jeremy. Its true that it could be a rap/song.