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Off Topic => Art => Songs, poems, etc. => Topic started by: Diablo637 on June 20, 2008, 06:41:53 AM

Poll
Question: How well written is this poem? (1-10)
Option 1: horrible (1-2)
Option 2: poor (3-4)
Option 3: fair (5-6)
Option 4: good (7-8)
Option 5: excellent (9-10)
Title: Judgements
Post by: Diablo637 on June 20, 2008, 06:41:53 AM
 

Since the beginning of time

Every thought

Every action



Our goals

Our wants

It?s all been overlooked!



Even if it means we change ourselves

We try our best

If only to impress those who judge us,



But in all likenesses

Thos ewho judge us

Only wish to be

Like us...


Yet another poem written for school.
Title: Re: Judgements
Post by: Diablo637 on June 20, 2008, 06:42:45 AM
" I need a moderator to lock this topic...please. "
Title: Re: Judgements
Post by: Volcanic Me on August 30, 2008, 11:53:10 PM
Wow, great work, I'd hate for it to be locked, it truly was good. Honestly!
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