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Off Topic => Art => Songs, poems, etc. => Topic started by: Diablo637 on June 20, 2008, 06:27:55 AM

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Title: Please Walk!
Post by: Diablo637 on June 20, 2008, 06:27:55 AM
 

The land we now walk,

Was walked by our ancestors,

In a time of peace and simplicity

Our great God roamed these lands.



For many years this land has gone un-trudged

But now in a day of reckoning

I ask you

Will you father?

Will you walk again?

This was one of many poems that I had to write for school.
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Post by: Diablo637 on June 20, 2008, 06:28:50 AM
" I need a moderator to lock this topic...please. "
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Post by: Volcanic Me on August 30, 2008, 11:54:26 PM
Great poem, even though I don't believe in "God".
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Post by: nikeman on October 04, 2008, 09:40:33 PM
Great poem! I can't write poems have as good as u.
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Post by: Diablo637 on October 18, 2008, 11:01:41 PM
Thanks Guys
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Post by: Chaoslancex on October 28, 2008, 01:27:09 PM
well its a nice  :D

keep up the good work. ;)

Chaos.
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