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Off Topic => Art => Songs, poems, etc. => Topic started by: the black arrow on June 20, 2008, 05:56:05 AM

Poll
Question: How well written is this poem?
Option 1: horrible
Option 2: poor
Option 3: fair
Option 4: good
Option 5: excellent
Title: love
Post by: the black arrow on June 20, 2008, 05:56:05 AM
Love is a burning passion
Full of light, love, and desire
Each is different in many ways
With two hearts required
Equally they will try

The same goal in mind
Will both make it?
Obsticles will block the path
Chalenges shall come
To overcome is a test
Of which is difficult
Many will fail
Some will pass

There are many questions
Some answers are still unknown
Only one can be answered by time
Will it last?
Title: Re: love
Post by: Sweet Tea on June 24, 2008, 04:43:56 PM
I like it! =]
You left out an "l" in challenge. Other than that awesome.