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Off Topic => Art => Songs, poems, etc. => Topic started by: brianc on August 16, 2010, 11:05:02 PM

Title: Death Deserved
Post by: brianc on August 16, 2010, 11:05:02 PM
Death Deserved

What have you taken away?
a shadow of chaos as emotions crawl.
once we savored bliss,
untainted and open,
but your love perished.
a sickening cloud of darkness -
drops of blood follow death, follow hate,
love left to die.
In a storm of vengeance,
I condemn you.

You are the reason for how I am.
You are the death of me, and what is to come in my life.
I am, the remains of the tainted love.

Regards,
Brian Crowell
Title: Re: Death Deserved
Post by: Drunk Mario on August 16, 2010, 11:06:45 PM
Where are you getting these from? Are these your thoughts? Because that's like..(not healthy?)
Title: Re: Death Deserved
Post by: brianc on August 17, 2010, 12:38:54 AM
Hello,


I'm Gothic, It's my way of life.

Some people get freaked out by it, but that's to bad.

Anyways, I appreciate the comments.

Regards,
Brian Crowell
Title: Re: Death Deserved
Post by: Drunk Mario on August 17, 2010, 11:27:09 AM
Oh.. well that explains all these weird poems.