I'm not exactly sure whether you'd call this a poem, a rap or a story that just rhymes. Whatever the case my be, I presume that this is my most story-like creation. I wrote this yesterday, Thursday, June 12th, 2008. Feedback is welcomed, PLEASE LEAVE FEEDBACK!
Another Day
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Another day, a new start
I pop a pill to start my day off
Do these really make me smart?
Take too many at once, and i cough
Lovely feeeling, and doze off
An hour later, the Morphine is fading
I set here debating
Whether or not i should pop a 30 M G
Yes! That's it! That's my key
To numbness, and no feeling
Meet up with some friends at the peak of my high
At this time, i'm low on my supply
Ask a friend, hey, wanna sell me some pills?
While he answers, his words blurred, I feel as if i'm floating on black-brazil hills
My body feels weightless, pain numb, yes, these pills do fullfill
I return home, noone about
Pop another pill, lay on my bed and zone out
Pain found it's home again
Deep within, i feel i must relieve oneself
Why do I punish myself?
I know that's fucked up to say
How many times have I visited this place?
How many happy pills must I take?
I wish I could rip off my face
Still being alive is my biggest mistake
The happy pills are getting me high
My chest is so tight
I think I'm going to die
To my head is a phone, 'Someone help me, Please! '
I'm leaving this life, theres things undone
I fall down to my knees
To my head is my hand with a gun.
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? Pharmacist J
Please leave comments.
Wow Pharmacist J, you continue to amaze me by your poems. Great job!
Yea your poems are really good at showing real life situations, and they just feel so real! :D
hotqueen11-sorry im not on my username but that was great.........i hardly doubt i could write soemthign so good.
that is a very good poem,and i agree with ry. I also hear that sometimes there are poem contests and one of my friends won 2nd place and got 500 dollars i think you should try to enter a contest because i think you would win. :)
can you right some love peoms please im tring to get a realy nice and pretty girl to love me
So.. What your saying Nestle, is that you want him to create the poem, then you steal it and take credit for it?
Quote from: I pooN I on October 14, 2008, 06:27:37 PM
So.. What your saying Nestle, is that you want him to create the poem, then you steal it and take credit for it?
I think thats the basic overview, but with a more "I didn't think of it that way" approach. ;)
Lol ok, that slightly clears it up.
wow your really talented and its preaty neat, am not really a good poem maker :D
keep up the good work ;)
Chaos.