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Title: Regret the Consistency
Post by: Pharmacist J on May 30, 2008, 11:00:30 PM
Regret this Consistency

My pain is great,
My pain is crushing,
I'm in a state,
Where I am gushing.

I pop pills every night,
I take five or more,
They make me feel alright,
But then I go soar.

The pills make me happy,
Not much else will,
If I don't have them I feel crappy,
That's all I have for my fill.

Morning comes,
The overwhelming mind state appears,
Pop a few making everything numb,
An hour later, I don't know where to steer.

The road i'm traveling,
I feel I'm battling,
Weapon of choice; Ecstasy,
Why can't you understand? I simply regret this consistency.


? Pharmacist J

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Feedback is welcomed.




Title: Re: Regret the Consistency
Post by: Cavallers on May 31, 2008, 07:00:41 PM
nice hehe and also why did you become a allgofree support user?? donator?
Title: Re: Regret the Consistency
Post by: Volcanic Me on June 05, 2008, 05:22:02 AM
Nice man, really. That was great.


             -Volcanic Me.
Title: Re: Regret the Consistency
Post by: Ryan7 on August 05, 2008, 01:28:56 AM
Amazing! Keep writing the poems man, you are wonderful at them! keep e'm comming!  ;D ;D ;D
Title: Re: Regret the Consistency
Post by: Petey on November 13, 2008, 08:30:56 PM
HOLY SHIZZLE! You're an expert, on Poetry's dude. I'm sure, you'd be able to win a Poetry competition, if you enter one ;).
I didn't notice this earlier, but now I just noticed that this whole section is filled with threads by, "Pharmacist J". I'm very impressed. I wish I had the talent, in making Poetries like the ones you do :).

-Petey
Title: Re: Regret the Consistency
Post by: xxgenocidexx on November 16, 2008, 10:40:26 PM
Wow i too just noticed this whole section of these threads and they're amazing i deffinantly will check into here a lot to read these.  Great job J and keep on making more of these their great!

~Genocide