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Title: Go away...
Post by: Pharmacist J on May 27, 2008, 01:32:43 AM
I would like to take a second and point something out to all of you whom of which are reading this. As you can tell, drugs can alter your sense of thoughts; please don't ever try them.

Go away...

Pain, go away...
On my heart you seem to prey.
Go away,
Heart you prey...

Tears streaming down this face
To me they seem such a disgrace
Tears on face
Such disgrace

Old Man Time, help me out
A new heart I need, no doubt
Help me out
New heart no doubt

For this one broke, past repair...
I have to say in such dispair.
Past repair,
Such dispair...

Pills, make me forget this world
Say I in a ball tightly curled
Forget this world,
Ball tightly curled

God, make this torture end
For have I almost lost a friend
Torture end
Lost a friend

As I sit, rocking myself to sleep
I know that pills will make it stop; I weep
Rock to sleep
Yes, I weep

Yes pills can take it away
So as I sit in anguish; I pray
Take it away..Take it away..
I pray

Pain killers aren't strong enough for my soul
Maybe I need more, on the ground I roll
Aren't for my soul
Ground I roll

Blurry room
Heart a-boom
Dosed to my Doom
Here comes the gloom
Pained position I assume
Death over me seems to loom
Here comes the weepers to my tomb
Not too many, I would be right to presume
Earth takes me back; hard dirt does me consume

Pain Killers strong enough
For my troubles were really tough
Not strong enough
Really tough

How through my troubles can I win
While my battle lies deep within
Can I win
Battle within

Weakness comes
My heart-ache this is its sums
Comes
Its sums

Pain too strong,
To me, I thought it shouldn't belong
Am I strong
No.. I don't belong

The pain can't mend
This is the end

? Pharmacist J

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Feedback is welcomed!  ???
Title: Re: Go away...
Post by: Cavallers on May 31, 2008, 07:15:57 PM
 :o :o nice one!!!! you really really should work on poems whit sound :D
Title: Re: Go away...
Post by: Volcanic Me on June 05, 2008, 03:03:36 AM
I 100% love your poetry! You're extremely talented. This is a great poem, by the way.


                            -Your Newest Fan, Volcanic Me.
Title: Re: Go away...
Post by: Hybrid 0wner on June 05, 2008, 06:30:26 AM
 :o I feel the pain.....




    Dude nice poem!  ;)
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Post by: darkflash on June 05, 2008, 04:10:34 PM
 ;D man this one right here was perfect i loved it some much man UR SO GOOD!!! KEEP IT UP!
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Post by: Ry60003333 on June 06, 2008, 10:58:17 AM
These are really good.  :o
Its amazing how great they sound, you can tell you really put thought into this.  :)
Title: Re: Go away...
Post by: Pharmacist J on June 08, 2008, 12:24:09 AM
Thanks! I do put a lot of time into them. It helps cope, i presume..
Title: Re: Go away...
Post by: Con1887 on June 08, 2008, 12:32:55 AM
You are very good at poems. I'd like you to post more if you can. ;D
Title: Re: Go away...
Post by: Chris Bud on July 17, 2008, 09:07:31 AM
One thing I wouldn't mind knowing. Is where do you find your inspiration to right poetry? ???

That's if you wanna answer me ;)

     ~Chris
Title: Re: Go away...
Post by: kaasklote on July 19, 2008, 01:08:31 PM
Look around u
flowers are blue i sniff glue :D
see its easy
but its also a very good poem
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Post by: Zeldagirl on July 22, 2008, 05:41:29 PM
Wow!

That last poem left me awestruck, I really can't believe how good you are at this. PLEASE never stop doing this. I LOVE to read them! There beautiful in a sense and it really tells your story.

Great Job Pharmicst J! Kudos to you.

Zelda.
Title: Re: Go away...
Post by: god1 on September 17, 2008, 12:05:08 AM
WOWZA.  nice you know what your doing.  :o
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Post by: huntress on October 23, 2008, 01:03:45 AM
^.^

It's really good! i've seen you poetry, it made me cry XP happy tears ^.^.

Keep it up =].

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Post by: Ry60003333 on October 26, 2008, 11:16:50 PM
Yea Pharmacist J, your work is really amazing. When do you think you'll be making more? :)
Title: Re: Go away...
Post by: matty300 on November 29, 2008, 12:40:48 PM
Wow... -sob- that is really amazing i can feel the emotion, you must take alot of pride in your work and your inspiration and messages must drive you.
Great poem, if only there was a subscribe button. ;D
P.S-You should ask Jeremy or Ryan to move the link to these peices of artwork a little higher up so more people can feel emotion through words.

Your second new fan!

Matty300