one day I woke up with a sore on my head!!! Hurt so bad I was good as dead! when I realized.....damn!! I was sucka punched!!!! shot a guy In the face last week, blew up a cow with a bazooka!!! (chorus) who cares!!! I sucka punshed my lovers and all o' those who care because my life's a wreck like pair of broken stairs!! (chorus) who cares!!!
these broken wings won't fly!! just leave me here to die! you know that.. i'm always.... hopin that I..make it back to....................HOME. SWEET! HOME! and If you sucka puch me again, get ready for this.........................................................(bone crunching sound) YEAHHHHHH!!!
Very creatve! ;D ;D ;) ;D ;D ;)
I recommend talking to Volcanic me for structural support and overall strength..If you want to write REAL POETRY
well, i think it's original. Everyone has there own ways of making poems. You shouldn't tell people how to make their own, it's stupid. Good job max. ;)
sorry I haven't been on in 4evr I'm really sorry and thanks for that mushu
Nice work max, Keep them coming :)