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Off Topic => Art => Songs, poems, etc. => Topic started by: Pk0wnedall on August 22, 2010, 05:44:05 AM

Title: Crystal In The Night
Post by: Pk0wnedall on August 22, 2010, 05:44:05 AM
Your like a diamond in the sky,
your a ruby in the night,
your a sapphire in the day,

You are the crystal that powers me,
you always act like this to see,
I know you love me, i know you do,

You just can't admit it,
I saw you the other day
sittin with another guy,

It broke my heart to see,
the other guy in the sky,
You said you'd never leave me,

You must of lied,
i'll never trust you,
you are a fuckin b*tch,

I never want to see you again,
you are a lieing piece of work,
don't call me tonight or tomorrow at work,

You said you'd be there for me,
you lied and you hated me,
i don't think your the one.

This is my 3rd poem i've ever written out of my 3rd poem!
Title: Re: Crystal In The Night
Post by: Annakarl on August 22, 2010, 08:50:28 AM
nice one jack keep up the good work
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Post by: Drunk Mario on August 22, 2010, 09:52:51 AM
This is one of MY favorite poems by you. Excellent Work! Keep up the great work Jack!
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Post by: Pk0wnedall on August 23, 2010, 01:52:00 AM
Thanks guys, i love writing poems!
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Post by: Yoho on August 23, 2010, 05:46:27 PM
Cool, your good. :)
Title: Re: Crystal In The Night
Post by: Daxking on August 24, 2010, 01:45:14 AM
Woah, Incredible. Niceeee.  :) If you like Poetry, keep making more. Make it a Hobbie.  ;D