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Title: My Mother
Post by: Drunk Mario on August 17, 2010, 07:56:11 PM

You are Mother
I am Collin
You are another
Caring Person

You Care me and Care for me
You cook and pay for me
You are my loving and caring Mother
You always Care me, Happily

I Care you very much
I appreciate you with all my heart
I hope you understand
That you will always be my Head Start

Title: Re: My Mother
Post by: cory on August 20, 2010, 07:47:44 AM

Awesome, that was great. :)

Title: Re: My Mother
Post by: Drunk Mario on August 20, 2010, 11:43:46 AM

Thanks! ;) It is pretty good.. Not one of the BEST but it is good.

Title: Re: My Mother
Post by: Sora on August 20, 2010, 11:53:26 AM

Nice work, good job.

Title: Re: My Mother
Post by: Drunk Mario on August 20, 2010, 12:06:19 PM

Thanks tiny! Like i said before, not the BEST but GOOD.

Title: Re: My Mother
Post by: Joker on August 21, 2010, 04:06:46 AM

I love my mother,because she cares about her son as Collin said but..Mothers some time becomes mad. :-\ AND I DON'T LIKE THAT!

Title: Re: My Mother
Post by: Drunk Mario on August 21, 2010, 11:55:19 AM

Quote from: Joker_ on August 21, 2010, 04:06:46 AM
I love my mother,because she cares about her son as Collin said but..Mothers some time becomes mad. :-\ AND I DON'T LIKE THAT!

Yeah.. But everyone gets mad..

Title: Re: My Mother
Post by: Daxking on August 21, 2010, 05:51:53 PM

Well done :) that was good. Make some more? :P

Title: Re: My Mother
Post by: Drunk Mario on August 21, 2010, 05:56:18 PM

Quote from: Daxking on August 21, 2010, 05:51:53 PM
Well done :) that was good. Make some more? :P

Thanks! I may make some more.. I'm not sure yet.

Title: Re: My Mother
Post by: Pk0wnedall on August 22, 2010, 05:39:13 AM

This poem is heaps good, great work!

Title: Re: My Mother
Post by: Drunk Mario on August 22, 2010, 09:50:01 AM

Thanks. my mom liked it too when i showed it to her. :)

Title: Re: My Mother
Post by: CabbageSIR on August 29, 2010, 03:01:32 PM

I wish I could feel the same, unfortunately my Mother passed away when I was 7..
But good job on the poem. :)

Title: Re: My Mother
Post by: Drunk Mario on August 29, 2010, 03:18:55 PM

Quote from: CabbageSIR on August 29, 2010, 03:01:32 PM
I wish I could feel the same, unfortunately my Mother passed away when I was 7..
But good job on the poem. :)

Thanks. Also I'm sorry to hear that. If you need someone to talk to you can surely pm me! I'll help you through anything man..

Title: Re: My Mother
Post by: Almond on August 30, 2010, 05:02:03 AM

Mothers are the sweetest gift from Gods to us. There is no way we can ever really thank our mother for all she does for us nevertheless we must make it a habit to keep reminding ourselves of the various sacrifices she made while raising us. Mothers' Day is the best time to say in words how much you love and care for your mum.

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Post by: Samsonn on October 13, 2010, 12:30:41 AM

hello guys... thanks..it is a good poetry....

Title: Re: My Mother
Post by: Pk0wnedall on October 17, 2010, 04:25:30 AM

^^^^ That is something write there ^^^^

Thats for the poem. :)

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