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Off Topic => Art => Songs, poems, etc. => Topic started by: brianc on August 18, 2010, 01:40:14 AM

Title: The Unknown
Post by: brianc on August 18, 2010, 01:40:14 AM
The Unknown

the night falls in a heavy, suffocating cloak, fearful are we.
the god for which you pray
flares once, then dies,
swallowed by guilt.
all hope must surely perish.

your heart desires no more.
how could you tear us asunder?
demons surround us, crying,
save us from ourselves.

When will they relish their spirits?
When will they understand, they are destined to the fallen realm?
Believe the unknown.
This is the way of the Gothic Crusaders.

Regards,
Brian Crowell
Title: Re: The Unknown
Post by: Drunk Mario on August 18, 2010, 02:39:16 PM
Once again, Nice job brian! I'd say 9/10.
Title: Re: The Unknown
Post by: cory on August 20, 2010, 07:45:52 AM
I really liked that, i want to see more.  ;)
Title: Re: The Unknown
Post by: Nympho on February 21, 2011, 12:54:59 AM
nice words...
Call for hope.