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Title: My True Love
Post by: Pk0wnedall on August 22, 2010, 05:42:49 AM
You are my love,
You were always there for me,
You didn't care about anyone,

I love you for it,
You make my heart pound,
It's skips a beat,

I know you love me,
I love you to,
You are the best girl,

My heart pounds,
we sit close to each other,
we watched scary movies,

We snuggled together,
we loved together,
you saw me when i'm down,

You are my one and only crown,
you know you always will be,
watch out or i'll drowned,

We are together,
you love me a lot,
Be there for me,
I'll be there for you.

Your my true love,
you know you are,
you know you will be always.

This is my first one my 3rd ever written poem!
Title: Re: My True Love
Post by: Drunk Mario on August 22, 2010, 09:51:46 AM
Great job! That is a really nice poem!
Title: Re: My True Love
Post by: brianc on August 22, 2010, 09:56:04 AM
Hello,

I would like to say great work put into this.

I would like to see more poems written from you.

Please feel free to post more, as many of us are eager to see talents of others in the arts of poetry.

Regards,
Brian Crowell
Title: Re: My True Love
Post by: Sora on August 22, 2010, 12:41:25 PM
Nice poem, looks like you put a lot of effort into it. Keep it up.  :P
Title: Re: My True Love
Post by: Pk0wnedall on August 23, 2010, 01:51:12 AM
Thank-you all, i just need to think of something good to write about.
Title: Re: My True Love
Post by: Samsonn on October 13, 2010, 12:32:53 AM
Redacted. -Pavilion
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Post by: Pk0wnedall on October 17, 2010, 04:37:25 AM
Redacted. -Pavilion
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Post by: Kryptonite on October 19, 2010, 09:50:37 PM
Redacted. -Pavilion
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Post by: Pk0wnedall on October 20, 2010, 12:44:41 AM
Redacted. -Pavilion
Title: Re: My True Love
Post by: masterp82 on October 27, 2010, 10:07:32 PM
nice poem brah brah...i will probably tell this to my girl haha....sorry bro im a little bit drunk.lol. wtf why am i saying this? lol...omfg.
Title: Re: My True Love
Post by: Vee Dub on October 28, 2010, 02:49:00 AM
Quote from: masterp82 on October 27, 2010, 10:07:32 PM
nice poem brah brah...i will probably tell this to my girl haha....sorry bro im a little bit drunk.lol. wtf why am i saying this? lol...omfg.
Yeahhhhh, Good Fight.

Making Love Poems at 11? Sweet as bro :P
Title: Re: My True Love
Post by: Pk0wnedall on October 28, 2010, 04:41:14 PM
Quote from: Vee Dub on October 28, 2010, 02:49:00 AM
Quote from: masterp82 on October 27, 2010, 10:07:32 PM
nice poem brah brah...i will probably tell this to my girl haha....sorry bro im a little bit drunk.lol. wtf why am i saying this? lol...omfg.
Yeahhhhh, Good Fight.

Making Love Poems at 11? Sweet as bro :P
I'm not 11, I'm 12 you noob. :)

And i was bored...
Title: Re: My True Love
Post by: masterp82 on October 28, 2010, 10:27:38 PM
lol...wtf!!!12?!1?!?!bro, you write better than me,lol. would you help me some day on my essays? :-#