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Off Topic => Art => Songs, poems, etc. => Topic started by: Drunk Mario on August 17, 2010, 07:48:20 PM

Title: An Empty Chest
Post by: Drunk Mario on August 17, 2010, 07:48:20 PM
What, what is this I see?
Is it an empty chest just for me?
You seem to feel the Heart,
The Why of all eternity.
The thing no Women desires.
Death is how I see things.
The scream I hear rings,
For nothing more or nothing less,
Nothing now but an empty chest
Title: Re: An Empty Chest
Post by: cory on August 20, 2010, 07:51:17 AM
Another great one.  :)

Lol i should probably stop posting on all of them.
  :P
Title: Re: An Empty Chest
Post by: Sora on August 20, 2010, 08:44:36 AM
Nice work done.
Good effort.
Keep up the good work.  :)
Title: Re: An Empty Chest
Post by: Drunk Mario on August 20, 2010, 11:43:13 AM
Thanks guys! I'm not the MOST poetic person but I do come up with these every once in awhile.
Title: Re: An Empty Chest
Post by: d1stortor on October 17, 2010, 09:32:32 PM
wtf! you actually made this poem? bro, that was actually some pretty good poetry bro. Not even my literacy teacher writes like that. good job man. Btw, i love the way you finished the poem. (the last two lines to be exact)
Title: Re: An Empty Chest
Post by: Pk0wnedall on October 18, 2010, 12:33:10 AM
Nice Poem Mario!