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Sucka Punched!!- Max Lauser

Started by HotMax123, November 14, 2009, 10:26:51 PM

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HotMax123

one day I woke up with a sore on my head!!! Hurt so bad I was good as dead! when I realized.....damn!! I was sucka punched!!!! shot a guy In the face last week, blew up a cow with a bazooka!!! (chorus) who cares!!!  I sucka punshed my lovers and all o' those who care because my life's a wreck like pair of broken stairs!! (chorus) who cares!!!
  these broken wings won't fly!! just leave me here to die! you know that.. i'm always.... hopin that I..make it back to....................HOME. SWEET! HOME! and If you sucka puch me again, get ready for this.........................................................(bone crunching sound) YEAHHHHHH!!!
"Life ain't life if you don't live it!"- Max Lauser (me!)
" Life is full of secrets, sometimess you need to break the rules for what is right and to get answers!"- Max Lauser

╬Max╬

Sir Tor

"These soldiers, men and women did not die so you can walk around and talk about how much you hate this country. Wake up you disgraceful pieces of ----."                                                      
-Unknown             
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Prehistoric

 I recommend talking to Volcanic me for structural support and overall strength..If you want to write REAL POETRY
Only YOU can prevent forum fires.

Mooshu

well, i think it's original. Everyone has there own ways of making poems. You shouldn't tell people how to make their own, it's stupid. Good job max.  ;)

HotMax123

sorry I haven't been on in 4evr I'm really sorry and thanks for that mushu
"Life ain't life if you don't live it!"- Max Lauser (me!)
" Life is full of secrets, sometimess you need to break the rules for what is right and to get answers!"- Max Lauser

╬Max╬

Pk0wnedall

Nice work max, Keep them coming :)