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Morphine - This will be my pain relieved

Started by Pharmacist J, June 11, 2008, 02:13:30 AM

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Pharmacist J

Hi. I wrote this poem in less than a half an hour. Mostly testing myself to see how fast i could write a poem. Please leave feedback.

Morphine
--
These pills in my hand,
   
are all that sustain me.
   
They'll kill me slowly,
   
and give me mercy.

   
My escape and release,
   
they'll be all that I need.
   
When tonight I take them
   
and disappear completely.

But until the Morphine,

Decides to finally kick-in,

Oh wait, I can feel that feeling...

That feeling, that takes me higher than my ceiling,

I'll sit here, mind blurred,

Numb, and painless

As the morphine surges through my vein

I wish this feeling would sustain,

Forever and ever, ridding my thoughts of stress,

Sitting here completely high, mindless, distraught and you could guees...


Once and for all, I'll take my leave.
   
This will be my pain relieved.


? Pharmacist J
The first step to success is failure.

Volcanic Me

That was really good for a poem you wrote in half an hour. =D


                 -Volcanic Me.

Ryan7

Two who were never ment to meet,
All the peices lie where they fell,
Where they wait for him...

Con1887

I've said this before and I'll say this again, Your a very good poem writer or typer. ;D

huntingmoon

I used to cut the porch lights on,
Now I cut the Porsche lights on,
Just to let em know that they foresights wrong,
You to fine to be layin down in bed alone,
I cant teach you how to speak my language rosetta stone,
I swear this life is like the sweetest thing I've ever known,
I really cant see the end comin any closer,
But I'll still be the man when everything is over.

I'm Doin Me-